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The Dawning of Love

Children high on a hill in the night, carefully tracing their footsteps at first, the countryside bandaged in moonlight. Feeling the thrill and the fear of being out beyond curfew as fairy lights flash in the valley, assurance their lifeline to safety is still within reach. Giddy with awe, gazing up at the heavens they are dumbstruck, imagining what it would be like to capture a star! Music from the campfire dances lightly on the breeze, shifting through the darkness like the whisper of a dream. He helps her climb a wall into their next adventure as they skip down to the river rippling merrily below. There's a feeling between them they cannot explain, a breathless attraction; joy fills their hearts and they know that they won't be the same. The first inklings of love are suggested at last, they hold hands, enjoying the moment, the spell has been cast!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/17/2014 8:51:00 PM
A lovely poem that touches the heart. Your descriptions are awesome and the way you've worded that first moment, that first love, spectacular!
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:58:00 PM
Loved this poem. It flowed so beautifully to the end.
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Date: 6/21/2014 4:26:00 PM
Childhood memories so perfectly portrayed always in your very special way. Makes me feel close to you Keith. Love, Lizzie
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Date: 4/12/2014 10:24:00 PM
Hi there Keith, long time no see, hope you doing well, and this is a great poem, loved it!
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Date: 3/27/2014 12:16:00 PM
Hi there! Yeah... I'm kinda proud of that particular phrase. Thanks for noticing! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/27/2014 9:45:00 AM
Hello There Love the line: countryside bandaged in moonlight. NICE Image!!!!
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