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The Dawn Sets

Sleepless years Serenade nights with my jaded spun Within the dream of unshutted eyes we meet Yet, the shadow of you sets along the risen dawn Ray climbs atop the hills of clouds I'm like a soul dwells within an empty square Which only replaced by brain and tasks Never been tired unless without you These eyes keep nailing To the walls of past's projections Droop by the reluctant heart Much better when I stop running, Chasing the absent of you At the brim of limit, I sing The song of my bias towards you Towards time And towards my incapability, To forget you

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Date: 2/10/2018 10:22:00 PM
A beautifully poignant poem Yanny, expressed with fantastic imagery and emotion. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/8/2018 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Yanny ! Great flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/5/2018 10:31:00 PM
I love the rythmic spiralling movement in your poem. Congrats on this well deserved win.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/7/2018 10:14:00 PM
Thank you Line Gauthier :) I am hlad that you like the poem, wishing you a great day =D
Date: 2/5/2018 5:34:00 PM
Great poem Yanny, you wrote this very well, I can see why it is your best poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/7/2018 10:14:00 PM
Thank you Silent One, I am very glad to be part of your contest ??????
Date: 7/31/2017 3:38:00 AM
- Dear Yanny - Nice to see you - Thanks for this lovely poem - I hope all is well with you - Regards and big hugs from //Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 8/1/2017 11:45:00 AM
Hello Anne, how are youuu? All is great here, really happy to see you come by to this poem, miss you from me and Ken xoxo
Date: 7/30/2017 11:08:00 AM
Hi Yanny , nice to meet , beautiful very Shakespearean feel to your write :)))hugs from Ireland
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 8/1/2017 11:43:00 AM
Nice to meet you too Niall :D, and thank you for your beautiful comment and visit to my page, I appreciate it a lot :D, have a great day!
Date: 7/13/2017 10:26:00 AM
Hi Janny, thanks for the visit! I enjoyed your poem, I always love how you express yourself. Hugs Rick.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/15/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Rick! I was so inspired of a movie when I wrote this poem :D thank you for the lovely visit, you made my day!

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