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The Dawn of a City

The dawn of a city The dawn of a city. With chirrupings of those last left sparrows. With husky sounds of the engines Of those big fat wheels. With the small kludge of people Running besides the footways- Some waiting on those bus stops;far.. Some jogging with sweaty showers.. The dawn of a city. The temple bells twinkling. The laughter of the yogis;filling the air.. The juniors with their heavy bags;seem tiring. The dawn of a city.. Then the almight settles in the blue. He doesn't complain. He doesnt't remain same. Wating for the dusk;he slowly darts. The dawn of a city.. This is the beginning of that tiring life. The life to reside in city;the affect that lasts. We often scribble of those peaceful days In those country yards. But how would you see there- The city's hazy start.. The dawn of a city..

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Date: 2/24/2016 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 6/9/2015 12:10:00 PM
Hi Aman,very nice poem.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 6/7/2015 7:15:00 PM
Welcome to Poetrysoup, Aman! This is a great way to start with a brilliant piece that reflects with awesome imagery a big city getting ready for a busy day! Well done! Pandita
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:18:00 AM
Aman, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2015 11:17:00 PM
the imagery is awesome, Aman, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Aman Khaneja
Date: 9/9/2015 8:08:00 AM
TY miss..:) More yet to come..

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