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The Dawn

Surprise lollipop To a child’s day, splashing A world of colour. The flying saucer With folded hands before its Searing, final blaze. The salubrious Sedation one likes to sleep Blissfully away. A touch of class to Any pedestrian stuff, A book or a song. Contest: Francine Roberts' " Morning,noon or night senryus" By; S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 21st aug 11

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Date: 1/19/2012 11:02:00 PM
I LIKE THE SURPRISE LOLLIPOP... ITS LIKE THE PERFECT MOON... all wonderfulll... always,..p.d.
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Date: 8/24/2011 1:09:00 AM
any new one jag?? miss your lines.. come and visit; did a new one.. and join my alouette contest!! .. i do have pity on you, lol.. that shadorma would have placed really higher; just had a typo error:) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/23/2011 9:54:00 PM
such wonderful expressions for the dawn of a new day Jag.. great visuals compliment this composition and catapult it to top of charts luv.. good luck..
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:01:00 AM
congrats on your win on my shadorma contest, jag.. wow.... come visit my pages! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/22/2011 2:53:00 AM
i like the gorgeous way your depicted early morn, jag.... oh, so enigmatic..winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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