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The Darkside

the devil is watching my cryptic charm my HEALTH IS GONE.

withdrawn from this world just a HELPLESS PAWN.

Eternally burning while standing in this acid rain.

unbelievable pain death is flowing through my veins.

addicted to this pain I am going insane.

because my words are profane and look down on with disdain.

I am not humane, God knows I can never be saved.

Because I gave into this pain, my road to hell has been paved.

I am just a depraved individual a soulless criminal.

My life deplorable and fill with agony.

Why I am I being tormented.

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  1. Date: 12/10/2010 10:03:00 AM
    Sad to feel eternally separated from God..God is there and when feel separated it is us who has left not him..Good work on an unusual topic..Your comments on my work was very interesting I was glad that you stopped by to say hello..Sara

  1. Date: 12/2/2010 6:55:00 AM
    Beautifully painful write....remember its not too late to save yourself.

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 9:47:00 AM
    You have asked a question yourself and answered yourself too, Dion

  1. Date: 11/3/2010 7:02:00 AM
    Torment... pain separation from salvation. This poem is full of pain. Welcome to poetry soup hope your day gets better!!