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The Darkness At Noon

As the moon passes over the sun the earth to darkness is plunged in olden times people were in fear thinking this is the world's end Pitch blackness covers the earth day and night are now reversed no bird songs now can be heard just an ominously deep silence slowly so slowly the light returns a collective sigh of relief from all today is not yet the world's end just an eclipse of startling magnitude 05/07 2014 contest The Darkness at Noon

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Date: 5/15/2014 8:27:00 PM
I'm so glad to see this one rated rather high. It was so deserving of that. Congrats, Shadow.
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Date: 5/15/2014 1:30:00 PM
congratulations on a great win! Lori
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thanks for your support and congrats on a win in my poem, Shadow
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:37:00 AM
very well expressed... nicely done!!! ~~ Congratulations, Shadow!!~~
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Date: 5/8/2014 9:49:00 PM
very nice description of how the ancients used to interpret things. I really like your entry into this contest, Shadow.
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Date: 5/8/2014 8:28:00 AM
Hi Shadow, I just found out You picked my cowboy poem, Yippie Kayay! You just made my day! Your contest was rooten tooten good fun. I am now off to read the other entries. Thanks for choosing my piece.
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Date: 5/8/2014 8:20:00 AM
Perhaps the Eclipse is to help us practice for the end times and to make us realize our ending is but a beginning to our eternity.
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Date: 5/8/2014 8:08:00 AM
Nice imagery! Ty, I really felt what you were saying! Also, thank you for the nice words you said to me!
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Date: 5/7/2014 4:46:00 PM
Nice poetic way to describe a solar eclipse. Within our solar system, this only occurs on the Earth. I remember seeing the one on the East Coast of the United States back in March of 1970. The moon's shadow traveled up the coast from the Carolinas to the Canadian maritime provinces.
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