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The Darkness At Noon

Inconsolable soul when silently cries, Every moment it burns bit by bit, No tears could be seen in the eyes, Encaged in body strives to quit ! Whipped by memories of consistent sorrow, Time as if has decided to trick, Joys of life could never borrow, Can worst of times forever stick ? Someone rescue me out of the deep ditch, Longing to have my share of sunshine, I ought to return to my home pitch, Strong desire to thrive and rise alpine ! Heyday of life, still darkness at noon, Hoping against hope for one glimpse, Wanting to live a night of full moon, Will I be shimmering after an eclipse ? Written on 6/5/14 Sponsor- Dr. Ram Mehta Contest- darkness at noon Now for contest- not just any old quatrain Sponsor- Kelly Deschler Now for contest " My days are dark" by Linda

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Date: 8/17/2015 8:15:00 PM
Congrats, Upma. Way to go. ;) Jag
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Date: 8/16/2015 9:40:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/14/2015 7:43:00 PM
Dr.Upma, l just stopped by to say congrats on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/14/2015 7:00:00 PM
Dr Upma :) Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Poem for One Victim" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:00:00 PM
Dr Upma, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:18:00 PM
"Someone rescue me out of the deep ditch, Longing to have my share of sunshine, I ought to return to my home pitch, Strong desire to thrive and rise alpine !" Love it!!! Big , big congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 10:25:00 AM
Indeed you will be shimmering, congratulations on a fine win.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:37:00 AM
Thnx for ur true wishes Richard ! I m surely hopeful!
Date: 7/28/2014 7:10:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, dear Upma! .. I so want to rescue you!!... Hugs.. Arlene
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:39:00 AM
Thnx Arlene ! I m so dying to be rescued ,, give me ur hand dear!
Date: 7/28/2014 3:13:00 AM
This is beautiful, Upma! No wonder it is once again a winner! Love the last stanza. There's no harm in dreaming, after all we live to make dreams come true! Congratulations:) // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:40:00 AM
True Paul ! Appreciate u want me to dream ,, n wish my dreams come true! Thnx a lot !
Date: 7/28/2014 1:09:00 AM
Congrats again for a fine win, Dr. Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:42:00 AM
Thnx Dr Ram !
Date: 7/27/2014 11:48:00 PM
Congratulations on winning with this again. Love, Joyce
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:43:00 AM
Thnx Joyce !
Date: 7/27/2014 8:24:00 PM
There will always be brighter days ahead for us, if we just keep our hopes up! Inspiring work, Dr. Upma! Congrats on your win!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:36:00 AM
Thnx for lovely wishes Kelly !
Date: 5/16/2014 11:37:00 AM
Dear Dr. Upma, Wonderful write Congrats on the win. SAM :-)
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations! sorry for previous typo lol! Well deserved win! Lori
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:07:00 AM
Cingratulations on your win Lori
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:32:00 PM
congratulations on your fine win, Dear!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:34:00 AM
Date: 5/15/2014 11:37:00 AM
Thanks for your support and congrats on a win in my poem, Dr. Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thnx Dr Ram ! Sorry I m too late in acknowledging !
Date: 5/6/2014 4:34:00 PM
great pen Doc Upma gl in contest hugs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/8/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Shadow for the like n the wishes !
Date: 5/6/2014 3:01:00 PM
when all the tears have flowed to dry and there's nothing left but the stark black of sadness...my first thought after reading this very strong poem...well done
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/8/2014 10:58:00 AM
Yes right Frederic , tears go dry ! Thanks for ur valuable comments !
Date: 5/6/2014 1:07:00 PM
the depth and the scale of your imagery astounds, dr. urma... Ihis is a fantastical ride on the dark side of noon.. remarkable read!.. huggs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/8/2014 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Nette ,, for passing by n ur lovely comments !

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