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The Darkness At Noon

I have known darkness-- the murky ebony of a loveless marriage; terrifying blackness, death threatened by a husband's hand; oppressive onyx, my children alone in his shadowy presence; jeering jet, a son entrapped by substance abuse, abandoned by his father; maddening midnight, the terror when my boy died. This weight of darkness I have known, lived, owned. Yet, I know nothing of the dark depths the Divine endured for me . . . for the world-- carried on His shoulders, laid upon His back, nailed into His hands, His feet; crushed into His head . . . blackest terror of isolation complete when His Father turned His face away, away from sin's dreadful cost. The universe in the grip of the eclipse of God-- the darkness at noon. Copyright, 4/29/2014 Faye Gibson

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Date: 5/15/2014 8:31:00 PM
wow, this is so amazing. I think it deserved first place. Congrats. It was utterly beautiful in its profundity.
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Date: 5/15/2014 1:32:00 PM
Amazing write! Congratulations on your win! Lori
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/15/2014 6:21:00 PM
Thank you, Lori.
Date: 5/15/2014 12:32:00 PM
very well written.. I awe this piece.. Congratulations ,Faye!!! :O))
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/15/2014 6:20:00 PM
AiyaH, thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and appreciate it.
Date: 5/15/2014 10:11:00 AM
Thanks for your support and congrats on a win in my poem, Faye
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/15/2014 6:20:00 PM
Dr. Mehta, I am humbled by your placement of my poem in your contest. Thank you.
Date: 5/8/2014 5:44:00 PM
Truly breath taking words that inspire a deeper understanding of sacrifice! The human spirit endures all if love still resides in the human heart..
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Date: 4/29/2014 7:40:00 PM
Thank you. I value your opinion for a admire your work.
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Date: 4/29/2014 7:38:00 PM
Powerful words Faye. Amazing. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/29/2014 7:42:00 PM
Thank you. I value your opinion for a admire your work. Oops...posted that as a comment on my own poem.

Book: Shattered Sighs