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The Darkest Rain

The Darkest Rain BIRTH the dawn of the sun flourishing of cells begun birthing decadence FIRST STEP one innovation persuading the rest of feet laziness prevails PUBERTY metamorphosis strength divided by deceit long arm of the law REBELLION growing civil unrest the mass desecration of war eminent demise DESTINY timeless prophecy lethal black poisonous skies death falling like rain By: Jeremy Siedlecki this poem is designed as a scale between the lifetime of a man and the length of mankinds existence

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2011 4:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 11:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with thes fine haiku poem entrie.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/20/2011 9:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your success with this awesome haiku series, Jeremy. I do like the way you reflect on man's journey through this earth in chronological order. Brilliant images! Love, Carolyn

The Situation

Date: 1/18/2011 7:25:00 PM

congradulations on your win. T. H.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/18/2011 1:21:00 PM

Very creative entry for the contest. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. Caryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:20:00 PM

Destiny was my favorite in the series, reminding me of the route I took with this challenge too. Congrats on your great win, Jeremy. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2011 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, jeremy

James Fraser

Date: 1/17/2011 12:16:00 PM

Congrats Jeremy on your win in Skat's contest....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 11:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:45:00 AM

Congrats Jeremy on your fantastic win in the Dark Rain contest with this fabulous entry .. so vibrant and intense... enjoy your top ten success with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Jeremy sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/17/2011 3:46:00 AM

Jeremy each haiku has it's own identity and yet they all fit perfectly into the scheme of things.. Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest :) Wilma

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2011 2:46:00 AM

Excellent!Congrats on your big win jeremy!

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2011 9:27:00 PM

Congratulations, Jermy !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 8:29:00 PM

Jeremy, yours is a bit like mine!! I am viewing different entries tonight before posting my own trio. I see you are on my wavelength. I wish you well in the contest. LUv, andrea

Stephen Parker

Date: 1/14/2011 7:57:00 PM

You aptly describe the cause and effect in each stanza. A well thought-out poem!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/14/2011 4:34:00 PM

beautiful images you have created of the dark raIN, jeremy

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/14/2011 4:16:00 PM

I agree with the lovely P.D excellent work done here...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 4:00:00 PM

wow! Jermy, if this is for the contest,, its super awesome.. enjoyed eachone,..p.d.