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The Darkest Place

The fall comes early to frost covered souls bound in damp, worn wool blankets barefoot wanderings over cold birch branches, sticks, crack covered ground thorns, thistles, briars scratch, pierce the skin tug at the coverings lay bare the naked heart to face the hollow cold without purpose only a ceaseless longing alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2016 8:10:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it and I will be posting more in the future
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:40:00 AM
Jack Bowman, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry---LINDA
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:56:00 AM
JACK, I like this very much SKAT
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