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The Darkening Storm

as rain begins to fall from the sky my forgotten memories make me cry I feel forsaken and I don't know why my entire body begs to die as tears slowly fall from the sky the rain comes down harder still and I force down a bitter pill a pill of sorrow and regret of all the fears I've never met of what I should have always been all just memories in the end the sky blackens with the storm and I begin to slowly mourn everything that has been torn my heart, my soul, is all forlorn as I darken with the storm near the end of the day the rain begins to ebb away but the darkness lingers still and I wonder why, until I realize with a start that the darkness is my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/28/2009 6:13:00 AM
I think if you dwell to much on your regrets and disappointments you will never move forward... it's hard, I know, but well worth the effort... God bless, Keith
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:54:00 PM
Write some new poems, Dork! Luv (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^u^
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:52:00 PM
Well tell me next time, Cause I did some stupid shi. . . stuff. . . Let me know when you like me again/wanna go back out. . . .
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:45:00 PM
K, So what did I do to suffocate you?
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:42:00 PM
Idk, Just wanna know. Is that a no for the goin back out? Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^n^
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:31:00 PM
And where in Springfield, Missouri do you live?
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:05:00 PM
Well, My friend can be a dumbutt. We could try again, But it's all up to you. . . Just tell me what I did to suffocate you and I will work on it. And my friend will NEVER EVER talk to you again, Promise you that. Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz
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Date: 12/6/2008 5:23:00 PM
I knew you wouldn't answer. . . . ^n^ Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz
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Date: 12/6/2008 5:05:00 PM
Why did you go out with me if you knew you weren't looking for a relationship in the first place? Was it fun for you, While it lasted? Was I just another "THING" in your life that you knew you were just gonna throw away the next day? I want the honest to god TRUTH!!!!! Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^n^
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Date: 12/6/2008 5:00:00 PM
I have a SERIOUS question to ask you, But you don't have to answer it if you don't wanna? . . . . Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^.^
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Date: 12/6/2008 4:58:00 PM
You know you can write on any of my poems now, right? Love (I Think) Your Friend Alexz ^_^
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Date: 12/6/2008 11:28:00 AM
I added you as a friend on facebook. . .
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:32:00 AM
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
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Date: 12/5/2008 7:44:00 PM
can we at least be friends?
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Date: 12/5/2008 4:54:00 AM
Sowwy for screwin up the relationship. . . :..(
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Date: 12/4/2008 8:03:00 PM
be good as far as the heart and life will automaticly be good to you, i like this because its very truthful. what do you think of my poetry?
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:53:00 PM
wow this is so profound and heartfelt. You have put your heart into this, and it makes me feel heartbroken to read it. Wonderful job, keep it up. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:52:00 PM
*CRY* *SOB* I suck ass
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:33:00 PM
That's all you have to say when all day I've been thinking I did something wrong. . . I've also been crying and cutting since 12:00pm. . . Thanks!
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Date: 12/4/2008 6:13:00 PM
Homie cant you just at least be friends wit her? You really made her upset and hurt her real bad. I love her like my sister if you just tell her then maybe she will quit blammin herself. think bout it, you really hurt a sweet and loving that did nothing to you but yet youre ignorin her.
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Date: 12/4/2008 5:09:00 PM
Hey homie my name is Kylin, I'm Alexz's brother (Not her real brother). So I hear dat u dumpped my sissy. May I ask why? She has been cryin to me all day, And I don't like it when she cry like dat. So could you please tell me why?
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Date: 12/4/2008 3:04:00 PM
Such a poignant poem...Raul
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Date: 12/4/2008 12:37:00 PM
hey, you, why arent you talking to your girlfreind. why did you block her? see i told you i can get alittle over protective and i am now
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