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The Dark

Full of emptiness, and unbearably cold. deep, it seems dead, but very much alive. It grabs you and wont let go. Its as if its choking you, slowly taking you under. You cant breath, you start to panic but you feel helpless. Its thick and heavy Negative, yet rotten And unexpectedly mad, There’s anger and depression like I should have known better. It seems as if I’m filled with Selfishness and fear, There’s screams of terror, Its strong and rough, It over whelms. Controlling my thoughts. And here comes my end. As if my life is over.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/29/2014 11:22:00 PM
TERRA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:24:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Terra - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2014 10:34:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing.
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