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The Dandelions Beg To Differ

Waiting for the world to make sense again I jump back and forth every now and then Lush grass and blue sky, but I don’t know (The world’s too somber for a smile to show) There’s caution tape on the playground swing Hard to make heads or tails of anything In history’s quietest apocalypse (The world shut it’s doors nary a protest) And so I’m just sitting here trying to tame the fear... In spite of the calls to just wither away (did you not hear the news today? so much sorrow and grief, why don’t you cry? are you not sad?) As if I should be guilty for feeling glad (the world has enough trouble, they don’t need me to add) Watching it all pass by lighter than a cirrus cloud (Breathing in the sunshine while it’s still allowed) I listen to the children laugh and play Flashes of color to drown out the gray I know none of it makes sense right now But it’s all gonna be alright somehow Just gotta hold on and remember what hope is for Until the world make sense once more There’s boys playing marbles and girls picking April blooms (Did no one stop to fill their hearts with doom and gloom?) Frisbee, tag and somersaults In the afternoon They can run and skip Just like a toy balloon (did no one tell them It’s all gonna end real soon?) There’s people dying on the TV screen! (close my ears and claim it’s all a dream) Until the world makes sense again Toss all of your cares into the wind You can scream the end is near until the cows come home But I won’t give up my God given right to roam The birds’ll sing and the sun’ll shine Until all our sour grapes turn to wine The world is drenched in unease and yet here am I Enjoying the warmth of a spring breeze with every sigh All the signs urging us to rot away and wither But all the dandelions in the world beg to differ Let the orioles sing their soothing songs Let the cherry blossoms fill your thirsty lungs All the countless ways to say seize the day. To tell the truth... ...the world never made much sense anywaY

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Date: 5/7/2020 8:52:00 AM
"hmmmm" I smile. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Off to make ice wine with those sour grapes... xomo
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 3:47:00 PM
Cheers!
Date: 5/1/2020 10:09:00 AM
Great depiction of the last two months of world shutdown. The kids are still tossing frisbees and laughing, while the news is screaming Armageddon is upon us. Yet the flowers are still growing and the clouds are still rolling by us, as if nobody told them that the end is near. This is poetic in word and message, and so authentic in tone. Really enjoyed reading this today, Timothy. Welcome back to Poetry Soup! ~ John
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/3/2020 12:04:00 PM
Thanks again for your stop, my friend. Glad you could enjoy.
Date: 4/26/2020 11:27:00 AM
It is wonderful to read your poetry again Timothy. Welcome back to Poetry Soup. Our freedom that has been taken away by necessity is too difficult for some to bear. We all need to get out in the sunshine which is as important emotionally as physically.Masks are mandatory.We are restricted to travel between islands as well. I can't even see my grandkids when they are out of school so long because they live on the Big Island of Hawaii. Your poem expresses that loss of freedom beautifully! xxoo
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/27/2020 2:31:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome back. Hard to believe it's been over three years ... and yet I return and people still remember and can still appreciate. It's a warm feeling. I hope this lock-down can end soon for all of us!
Date: 4/26/2020 8:38:00 AM
Having 'abandoned' Soup and poetry writing for several months has done nothing to diminish your writing abilities, Timothy! As far as i'm concerned this is prose poetry at its best. Well done, my friend. Let's look at the beautiful aspects of life...not all is gloom & doom! Best regards // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/27/2020 2:30:00 AM
That's great of you to say, Paul ...... I was worried I would get rusty!
Date: 4/26/2020 12:02:00 AM
wow this is powerful and deep...my emotions have slowed my muse...it seems you have allowed yours to make some beautiful poetry...I've been trying to avoid the news...we have been off work and locked down since mid march...I had a beautiful warmer day to enjoy a little sunshine today... we have had unseasonably cold temps...I am hoping for warmth to just relax and breath a sigh of relief... another great write! hugs
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/27/2020 2:29:00 AM
Thanks for the stop, Sandra. I understand these trying times having a negative effect on writing ... for me, I'm trying my best to utilize this quarantine for creative endeavors. Sometimes it's works, sometimes it doesn't
Date: 4/25/2020 7:57:00 PM
absolutely amazing. i wish I could say this as poetically as YOU do. FAVE
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/27/2020 2:26:00 AM
You're sweet, Andrea. I appreciate your visits!
Date: 4/25/2020 2:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful piece of art and causes one to ponder current circumstances. The young are likely to be unscathed, unfortunately those who are a bit older or with underlying health concerns will likely not fare as well. I guess it’s a matter of what people think is an acceptable sacrifice.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/27/2020 2:26:00 AM
Thanks Rick. While it's too long of a thing to discuss here, I do believe that there are many long terms effects that will end up being worst than the virus itself when one considers unemployment, poverty, suicide, homelessness and so forth ... I hope I'm wrong though! "acceptable sacrifice" ... a harsh way to put things, but you are correct. A lot of things to consider.
Date: 4/24/2020 8:12:00 PM
That’s a great title, Tim ..... and I love how you juxtapose normal life with the now drastic changed state of affairs and capture the feeling of ‘this can’t be true but oh unfortunately it is’ all too true. Your closing line is perfect. Glad to see you back writing. Hugs, SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/25/2020 12:12:00 AM
Thanks Suz!
Date: 4/24/2020 3:05:00 PM
i love the title and the way you lead us to it in your well-written poem, timothy...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/25/2020 12:12:00 AM
Thanks Ilene!
Date: 4/24/2020 12:28:00 PM
NIce.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/25/2020 12:28:00 AM
Thanks Babbit!

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