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The Dance of Time

The whirling hands of the clock won't stop for you and me All we can do is watch and hope Before the tidal wave of the years washes our sand castles away The dance of time is something which we have no control over We are all trapped within it like marionettes we move and play various games As the years rush by and our mortal bodies disintegrate We reach for the brass ring but it eludes us and knowing that night will soon be upon us We light our candles and pray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/13/2012 3:19:00 PM
Love that line about thee sandcastles being washed away. Seems father time rules us and we have nothing to say about it. Great verse!
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Date: 9/9/2012 3:45:00 PM
Nice metaphorical descriptiveness in this entry. This is an impressive write.
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Date: 9/6/2012 3:33:00 PM
"washes our sand castles away" love this phrase, my friend! Nicely written piece! Kudos... Jack
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Date: 9/5/2012 1:15:00 PM
I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read Matthew. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:25:00 AM
Matthew, enjoyed your interpretation here, especially the ending :)
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Date: 9/4/2012 11:28:00 PM
well, you did dance of time while I did dances of life. I love the way you took yours to time. This is really nice!!
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