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The Dance

1. Desiree and Jillian were camped out on Echo Lake sunshine, fish breaking, what a day Desiree was using a new daredevil lure but she couldn’t keep them hooked she switched to Jillian’s trusty jitterbug and let fly 2. Agnes Bloom was a bright reflection of Desiree’s breezy childhood during daylight she wandered the lake in her polka dot boots south of Signal Island Agnes drew near as a water lilly swayed in the shallows calm water swirled as a handsome trout circled the graceful blossom 1. Jesus Christ this trout is pulling me out feed him more line Desiree reel the bastard in twenty minutes later Desiree carried him off 2. dear god what a fish

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Date: 8/30/2013 7:43:00 PM
Nice picture of Desiree and Jillian
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Date: 8/30/2013 3:23:00 PM
very nice ~
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Date: 8/30/2013 1:26:00 PM
... like it, well done Ralph ! - oxox // Anne-Lise ;))
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