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The Dance

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The Dance

The man in Berlin loves to dance
By the mist of the soft evening moon;
He takes his time to step on the rhyme
But he never found the tune.
There's a street where nobody goes
Where sad echoes bounce off the walls;
Where shadows march to the drum of woes
And crawl fast down the lonely halls.

You know dear I want you, I do
I need to lie down with you soon;
When the leaves on the tree are just a few
Come to me when love howls a tune.
There's a slice torn out of the sky
Day is scented with lilies of snow;
And weary birds find it hard to fly
They are scattered with no where to go.

There's a music hall in Berlin
Where the notes play loud to reviews;
There's a bar where no one is talking
They're condemned to death by the blues.
When will they look at your picture
And see the lost lonely years?
Come hold me my darling and dance
To the music of fantastic tears.

I'll dance with you in Berlin
I'll be dressed in laughter’s disguise;
With red roses between my breasts
And my hand caressing your thighs.
I'll yield to your aura of beauty
And see what you've got chained to tomorrow;
It will never be just a duty
To love you without all my sorrow.



This needs a bit of explanation; it has to do with
the second world war, the echoes are the haunting
past that brought the war about, and the shadows
are soldiers involved in the war. The rest is about 
the elusive happiness that could not be found.   


For Chris Aechtner's contest


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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 7:01:00 PM
    Very atmospheric! As always your phrasing is sharp and penetrating... '...sad echoes bounce off the walls,' '...there's a slice torn out of the sky,' '...scattered with nowhere to go,' and my favourites, '...condemned to death by the blue.' and'...the music of fantastic tears.' A wonderful composition! Nicely rhymed with a rolling flow. :)

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 12:40:00 PM
    This is really a good poem Elizabeth. I enjoyed reading it also. Well done.

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 8:48:00 PM
    wow this is a great poem I so enjoyed reading this. thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 9:34:00 AM
    Wow, what an amazing and romantic read, Elizabeth! Really enjoyed this and super congrats to you! Thanks for dropping by my poems with your kind words! :D

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 9:18:00 AM
    Congratulation my friend on your grand win and wish you and all yours 'a Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 4:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning entry Jon

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 3:38:00 PM
    congrats lizzie, this is awesome, it say so much about you, so intriguing, just love it. harry

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 3:35:00 PM
    lots of things to ponder and I'd add more verse rather than the footnote so you are sure the reader gets the important info ;) Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 12:32:00 PM
    Elizabeth, this is exquisite poetry through and through, and a difficult theme to grapple with. Thank you for supporting my contest. Congrats!

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 12:08:00 PM
    Lizzy congrats on your stunning win for a memorable poem, have a great Christmas holiday..David

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 11:57:00 AM
    Beautiful poem! Congratulations on your win in Chris' contest! Happy Holidays! Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 11:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super placement in Chris' contest Elizabeth. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 11:09:00 AM
    Truley lovely congratulations

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 9:16:00 PM
    I sneak peeks at your words whenever I feel strong enough to tolerate the bright light of exquisite beauty.

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 6:36:00 PM
    so wonderful,,,great poem...

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 7:44:00 AM
    Wow, thanks for the explanation. It helps us to know what you meant in this poem. Such a great and deep writing :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 11:18:00 PM
    Utterly beautiful one, Elizabeth!

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 12:48:00 PM
    Heya Elizabeth. Responded to your blog. I will sort of repeat myself here. You might not actually have writer's block at all, but simply need to pace yourself. Especially after writing amazing poems like this one. This poem is absolutely superb. Especially enjoy the overall zeitgeist. Very romantic.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 11:15:00 AM
    This is a really nice one by the way, luv, Hussain

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 11:12:00 AM
    Hmmm! Whats in your mind, haan????

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