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The Cycle of Man

Oh! My beautiful baby! How long I've waited to see your face To look into your eyes and remember How we came to this time and place The joy of inhaling your infant scent Oh! My beautiful baby! Can there be a more blessed event? Oh! My barefoot boy! Watching your days unfold Forever summer in your eyes Learning from each story told The adventure of each day Oh! My barefoot boy! Are there days of more wondrous play? Oh! My in-between boy! Struggling between man and boy Trying to find out who you are I daily watch your growth with joy Experiencing your very first kiss Oh! My in-between boy! Is there a way these days i would miss? Oh! My mature man! Now taking your rightful place As husband and father you grow Meeting the trials you face Watch your own babes learn to fly Oh! My mature man! Should I watch with a tear and a sigh? Oh! My venerable man! Wise now with the turning of time Observing this new world as it is Remember mountains you've climbed Content to watch them learn Oh! My venerable man! Do you know that now is their turn? For the Beseech contest...

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Date: 4/8/2011 12:16:00 AM
Barbara, I love this one. YOu did such an amazing job with this form. Paula has created something so special. Is it just one son you have? I recall the name Vacaville. something like that, when we drove a few times to Sacramento. btw, I think last line a typo on know for now? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/27/2011 11:11:00 AM
Dear LNC, you make me feel like I was right there with you watching your little boy grow to become a strong man. If he is venerable, he got it from you! Best wishes in the Beseech contest. You chose a wonderful interpretation of the theme and shared a big part of your life with us. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/25/2011 5:43:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me.Great idea of taking from birth to manhood..Enjoyed reading this eve.Good luck in the contest ...Sara
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Date: 3/25/2011 12:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Barbara. The best to you in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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