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Below is the poem entitled The Cycle which was written by poet Jenny brewer. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Cycle

New ripening buds,
Flourishing and blossoming,
withering, then dead.

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  1. Date: 5/6/2014 7:03:00 PM
    Hi Jen nice to meet you! You may do more than 1 haiku but they must be haiku - if you write 1 haiku, I will be very happy, above is not a haiku, so you take a bigger risk by doing more than 1 [though I will be glad to help you and check what you have written] here is a very good link which defines what "I believe is a haiku' ... give it a look. Light & Love

    brewer Avatar Jenny brewer
    Date: 5/12/2014 8:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Debbie,nice to meet you too.Thank you for help with my Haiku attempt.please look at this definition, the 5,7,5 count still stands as far as I understand it,If I were to change the capitals,I think it would be more of a Haiku also.??
  1. Date: 8/10/2013 1:25:00 PM
    Jenny love her haikus, I'll have to try one one of these days. Good job with "The Cycle", this one a mere 9 words! MC

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 5:46:00 AM
    Great haiku true to count and form, great title, I love haikus and enjoyed this one, blessings sueellen

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:41:00 AM
    Awesome! Hard-hitting last line! Let incipience shine through Death's scythe.

    brewer Avatar Jenny brewer
    Date: 8/6/2013 12:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you,you are the first who likes my Haiku