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The Curse

I curse you, strange being in the dark In error I curse you so! Never can I understand you, As my soul threatens to feel That I must That I should I curse you, As I would condemn my own mistakes, With an instinctive sting to the mind, Sending shutters in every valve of my heart Pumping my own blood and sweat Against your fight to destroy Yes, I curse you, As if, you powerful, horrible thing— As if you were fragile just as I am I curse you as if you feel the sting As I do As I am

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/8/2018 7:45:00 AM
An exercise in self-loathing? Makes for great writing Laura ...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/9/2018 6:55:00 PM
I can see that too. I originally wrote this as a note to the Devil himself - an extension of my Light on the Devil's Chord series.. Thanks Peter.
Date: 11/11/2016 9:50:00 AM
It is A-OK to be part good only. I am certainly flawed. It does not have to be a bad thing if we can keep ourselves under control. It would be nice if the forces of nature had some compassion for us. I suppose they do, but it does appear not to be the case at times. I find it difficult to give myself a break. I'm glad I am not the only one. As long as I learn going forward, I try to let go--but it keeps coming back. A real struggle.
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Date: 11/2/2016 2:28:00 AM
Our desires seem a curse when they confuse the heart, when the source of those desires shocks the soul when in the solitude of strange love Laura...your breathing is intense in this poem...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/2/2016 3:08:00 PM
It's quite an intense piece, yes. Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Justin. I look forward to reading more from your page. (: <3~Laura
Date: 10/14/2016 9:42:00 AM
Sounds like somebody really screwed you over. Potent emotions penned here.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 9:13:00 PM
Oh, has he..and all of humanity... (: Thanks Paloma, for stopping by again. I will be checking out your work soon. <3~Laura
Date: 10/14/2016 4:59:00 AM
amazing poem . thank you for sharing
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 9:13:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to read. <3!~Laura
Date: 10/14/2016 1:28:00 AM
- A great deep poems ...... As you do As you are, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/14/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Hope you have a lovely weekend! <3~Laura

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