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The Curse

Words are just words It's action that hurts I can't do action, so I'll do it with poems I want you to read all the pain that you fed Anguish in your future, take some pills for your head Love will not find you or even be near You'll be lonely forever, and I hope I can leer Your looks will be gone and you're mind, it will crumble Causing you to look up at all that is humble Happiness and consolidation are not in your view I hope you read this, and take it literally, for I'm talking about you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/15/2011 6:44:00 PM
Nice expressions with good narrative write, Sarah
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:35:00 PM
Not a bad write. For correct grammatical purposes: In your last sentence, change "literal" to "literally". You need an adverb instead of an adjective in that place.
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Date: 2/15/2011 3:59:00 PM
Interesting work..Good that you can write about it..Sara
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