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The Current

The current so strong The waves holding your heart;  Calling, pulling you  Yet so dangerous a draw; Running full force  Knocked down, lifted up; flipped somersault  Out of breath bliss on the shore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/6/2012 10:18:00 PM
Deeply written!!! The imagery here is beautiful Melani..enjoyed reading...INK-U-SCRIPT
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