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The Current

The current so strong
The waves holding your heart; 
Calling, pulling you 
Yet so dangerous a draw;
Running full force 
Knocked down, lifted up;
flipped somersault 
Out of breath bliss on the shore

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  1. Date: 8/6/2012 10:18:00 PM
    Deeply written!!! The imagery here is beautiful Melani..enjoyed reading...INK-U-SCRIPT