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The Curious Moon

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The Curious Moon

A young man leads his girlfriend to a tree
one sultry summer eve as night is looming.
the branches of the old oak form a canopy
under which he leans in for a kiss, assuming
his new love also feels their romance blooming.

The pretty girl is innocent and shy,
but from the boy’s sweet kiss she feels that he
might be her one true love; more kisses make a sigh
escape her lips. Her inhibitions flee,
and touching him arouses her curiosity.

Aglow, they feel a passion all-consuming,
undressing one another as fingers fly.
The curious moon, with incandescence blooming,
peeks down from a star-bedazzled sky.
Young love with moon above shall never die.


Written 10/17/12 for Francine Robert's
Romance me with English Quintains Poetry Contest
and now for A true love -poem #2 - Poetry Contest of poet destroyer A

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  1. Date: 12/29/2014 3:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win with this beautifully romantic poem Andrea.

  1. Date: 12/27/2014 6:00:00 PM
    Such a beautiful romantic write Andrea i cant believe I missed this before - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

  1. Date: 12/27/2014 2:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Andrea! Love your poem...very romantic...young love...and only the moon to peek...wonderful... Hugs, Sandra

  1. Date: 12/27/2014 12:12:00 PM
    Congratulations Andrea for another deserved contest win

  1. Date: 12/27/2014 7:49:00 AM
    Gorgeous, Congratulations on your win. A Fav!

  1. Date: 12/27/2014 12:40:00 AM
    ANDREA, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Sorry, it took this long to post the winning poems. Stop by my latest blog "A Woman's Gift" if you'd like. Enjoy life and the Holidays. :) Always ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 6/5/2014 11:12:00 PM
    Andrea What a sweet, loving, romantic and charming write. Love is the best thing in the world to have and give. Thank you for the great comment on my Scary Moments poem. Yes, something like this happened to me by a family member. Hugs

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:23:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 7:22:00 PM
    How romantic, congrats Andrea on your super duper win love vie

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 3:17:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:00:00 PM
    magical write andie! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 7:42:00 AM
    Awesome write! The imagery is really great, and the title is perfect! Congrats :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 6:43:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Andrea

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:27:00 AM
    Beautiful Write Andrea. Warm congrats for the win.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 1:15:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your first place win Andy , this is great xx

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:53:00 AM
    Heartfelt and innocent...charming write! great word choice...For your win.,.Goom bei (cheers in Anjiwa Chinese--dialect spoken near Shanghai)

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:10:00 PM
    magnificent as usual Andrea, congrats on your first place win

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 11:36:00 PM
    O yes; a true romance! A must-be-winner, dear Andrea. A very fluid flow of rhymes which suit the romantic atmosphere in this classic writing form. Beautiful! Best wishes!:) Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 5:16:00 PM
    "Isn't it Romantic." Your wonderful piece reminds me of this famous tune from the 30s. ...? Maybe the 40s. Love, daver

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