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The Crystal's Empty

. In mine duke the crystal sated firmly in my custody as mine gawp through the pane of your supple walk past I yesss the sound from the distance your sandals brushing the walk and the flurry of mine heart caused the rush of the crystal to mine lips The sounds turned to sight as you entered mine picture Oh the bliss of my pounding pulse held steady with assist of the red found in mine crystal Your pause to lean and sense the bouquet of my flaxen roses did lend hark to the crystal’s empty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/3/2011 9:55:00 PM
This poem is excellent! I agree with most of the comments below. It's quite a dazzling poem! Thank you for your sweet comment on my poetry. :) Always, Laura
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:21:00 PM
Oh my you are getting so romantic! I do feel this is a bit unfinished maybe a little more would help the reader understand the scene better? line 4 [gawp]? as I gawk? Light & Love
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:18:00 PM
So very creative and sensual,i can picture the view : )..trying to read some poetry today,have some time here..hope you're fine dear james and noah too!
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Date: 7/18/2011 5:27:00 AM
Straight into my heart! Loved it James!
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:18:00 PM
Interesting one about a crystal, James. Imaginative! Thanks for your comment on Trucker Joe. I know some drivers love their job, but it's no fun when you lose the job you really love and have to settle for so man headaches as driving for a bad company!
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:17:00 PM
soothing effect and feel that undersores the delightful strains of an oneserving heart, james.. wow! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:15:00 PM
A toast to this one, Sir James. Gadzooks! Just think what might come about should you pour another? Love, daver
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:17:00 PM
Sorry about your allergy to cats. As for myself - I get along fine, save for an occasional hairball. daver
Date: 7/15/2011 1:23:00 PM
Stoping by for two reasons..1st to read som of your fine poetry, 2nd how did you make out with the lady on the train??lol... Seriously 2nd to thank you for all the kind comments that you take the time out to write on my poetry....Stay well my friend... Michael
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:40:00 PM
well u have a unique way of expressing sweet emotion James.. a vague touch of old English .. a valiant sense of chivalry ..truly dynamic and breathtaking as I felt every line u penned with great fervor luv.. appreciate your sweet comments always on my work..luv.happy weekend...
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Date: 7/15/2011 10:30:00 AM
such a mysterious write!! Hope you and Noah are well! Light & Love
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Date: 7/14/2011 3:06:00 PM
Dear James. Thank you so much for your kind words and leading me back to your lovely poetry. I am reading your offerngs again with pleasure. It is hard to find the time we need to savor each other's poetry. I am proud to know that one of mine is in your favorites. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/14/2011 3:06:00 PM
Dear James. Thank you so much for your kind words and leading me back to your lovely poetry. I am reading your offerngs again with pleasure. It is hard to find the time we need to savor each other's poetry. I am proud to know that one of mine is in your favorites. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/14/2011 1:07:00 PM
James you have perked up my day....I was trying to get in a heavy neutral grey funk....my jowls as low as they could go. I was tripping on my lip....Now I can roll it up a little bit. boogy boogy boogy!! :-p] Thanks for the comments!!
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