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The Crows Looked On

Standing bare the trees looked dead Around their feet their raiments lay, Their life force, it seemed they shed On this bleak autumnal day. Black as sin, crows looked on Then screeched in noisy argument, A raucous call, no sweet birdsong, A croak the devil surely sent No-one else was there but me As I walked upon the crackling leaves, I wished I had some company I fancied ghosts walked midst the trees. Entry for COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(30) any theme any form Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand. 21/10/2020

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Date: 12/15/2021 10:08:00 AM
Another string of strong images on which to pen your fine poem. You are masterful, Gary. Be well. Brian
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Date: 10/26/2020 1:38:00 PM
I like the flow, rhythm and rhyme in this one and the nature theme. Reads like a good contender. Sara
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/26/2020 3:05:00 PM
Thank you Sara. :)
Date: 10/23/2020 4:50:00 AM
Gary, I really like this eerie, well-crafted poem. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 10/23/2020 4:51:00 AM
Thank you Carol. :)
Date: 10/22/2020 8:38:00 AM
- I did not want to walk alone in this forest, Gary ... a great poem - // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/22/2020 8:52:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 10/22/2020 5:13:00 AM
Perfect reflection expressed in tune with the picture. You captured it masterfully. Many congrats on your fine win, Gary. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 10/22/2020 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Elaine. :)
Date: 10/22/2020 1:03:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your placement. :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/22/2020 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Joanna. :)

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