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The Crow

I once heard a knock at my door And there was a crow repeating "No more" I was so taken aback I hit him with a rack And sent him crashing right on the floor! September,3,2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2014 10:47:00 PM

Now THIS is great rhyming!! A cute limerick.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/13/2014 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for stopping by and comment! xxx D.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/12/2014 8:41:00 AM

Thank you Andrea so much for stopping by. You're very kind my poet friend. See ya around! Lol... The best to you! xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/11/2014 9:02:00 PM

really smiling beautifully penned piece

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 10:23:00 PM

Thank you Liam! Nice to know it made you smile. Best wishes! xxxx D.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2014 3:37:00 PM

Great play on Edgar Allen Poe's work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 8:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara! I love Poe! Nice to know you enjoyed my silly and humorous Limerick. Hugs and God bless you! xxxx D

Ben Peralta

Date: 9/11/2014 12:34:00 PM

I really enjoyed this poem! It's simple and short but the words flow so smoothly. It was quite humorous to!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 8:05:00 PM

Thank you Ben! Glad to know you liked it. Lol. . Best to you my friend! xxxx D.

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/10/2014 8:53:00 PM

Funny stuff - sort of a comic re - write of E.A.Poe Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 8:03:00 PM

Thank you Matthew! I really appreciate you stopping by and reading this one. Best wishes my friend! Xxxx D.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2014 9:28:00 AM

Well crafted write with nice humor, Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/10/2014 4:22:00 PM

Thank you so much! Xxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/10/2014 8:47:00 AM

Lol....love it... Thanks for the morning smile.... Hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/10/2014 4:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Tim! Hugs to you too my poet friend. Xxxx D.