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The Cross

The young man worked quietly His Dad had been away, But he was full of emotion His Dad would return today. He had carved the wood with perfection His Dad would be so pleased, His Mom helped him gather daisies In the warm September breeze. The limousine pulled in the drive The boy saluted the men, They handed him his country's flag He felt his heart would never mend. The velvet box passed to his Mom As they bowed their heads to pray, Thankyou for our soldiers At home, and far away. That young boy is a man today And he still feels his loss, As he watches his son pick daisies To lay beneath the cross. Lynn Barany

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Date: 10/2/2012 6:07:00 PM
it's somthing i'll think about for awhile and read over and over again
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Lynn Hanna Barany
Date: 10/2/2012 6:16:00 PM
Hi Jodi, Thanks for taking the time to comment, I appreciate it. Cheers, Lynn Barany
Date: 9/20/2012 2:07:00 PM
So sad and still so touching. You are a master at this craft.
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Date: 8/20/2012 11:39:00 AM
My Lynn, how I haven't 'crossed' this poem before has annoyed me a little :-( this is such a sad but beautifully written poem. You are and always will be my favourite poet! You inspire me in ways no other have, this one is amazing, well done again. xoxox
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Lynn Hanna Barany
Date: 9/20/2012 3:19:00 PM
My man Ryan, thanks so much....you certainly are one of my highest inspirations. Lynn

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