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The Creek

River so deep, fathomless attractive, intriguing The stories your dark waters concealed My canoe crashed obscure boulder, inconspicuous blockade So much for my wisdom and being older The watercourse became narrow the stream became weak My majestic river dwindled to an unpretentious creek.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/22/2020 1:14:00 PM
Wow. Great poem. Those last few lines are killer. You write on more than one level...................peace!
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