The Creek

. The creek Gurgling, tingling Over rocks rushing to Eddies for stillness and some quiet The stream

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/8/2012 1:46:00 PM

Once again you have shown your mastery of the cinquain. Fine work.- Soup Mail for you! Peace & love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2012 8:56:00 PM

Good description, Sara. I like that word eddies!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/6/2012 9:31:00 AM

I could imagine being there, my friend - great descriptions. I don't think I've ever tried this form - looks like great fun - must try it.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/5/2012 7:05:00 PM

Such a lovely, quiet stream. Peaceful and soothing.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/5/2012 6:41:00 PM

This is a truly soft and delightful write! I just love the peace and calm that goes with water, though sometimes it can be treacherous, but here is quite peaceful! what a remarkable piece my friend! Great Work!!