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The Creators Creation

ON A MOON LIT NIGHT I STOOD ON THE SHORE LISTENING TO THE OCEANS THUNDEROUS ROAR VICIOUS WAVES CRASHING ON THE ROCKS CREATED MANY DISTURBING THOUGHTS UP ABOVE A GLORIOUS SIGHT A FULL MOON PASSING THROUGH THE NIGHT SURROUNDED BY BILLIONS OF TWINKLING STARS I HAND TO PONDER JUST WHO WE ARE NO LONGER COULD I HEAR THE OCEANS ROAR FELT I WAS STANDING BEFORE HEAVENS DOOR THE DARKEST BLUE THE NIGHT SKY CAUSED ME TO PONDER THE QUESTION WHY OF THE BILLIONS OF STARS THAT I COULD SEE I HAD TO ASK JUST WHO ARE WE MY LITTLE CREATURA ON THE SHORE CAME THE ANSWER FROM BEYOND THE DOOR

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 7/26/2017 12:45:00 PM

I like the title but the thought needs to be in tune with the title Go Deep! There's plenty of water to spare.

Don Pettinelli

Date: 7/17/2017 8:32:00 PM

I love everything about this Poem, It was a total inspiration to me. I found it well written and inspiring and it shows your gift of creativity. Poets like Robert Hayden have helped me improve on my writing. Thank you for sharing.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/17/2017 3:42:00 PM

Cute little :)

Rainbow Promise

Date: 7/17/2017 10:38:00 AM

Little Creatura, night light of the sky. Lovely.

Dean Wood

Date: 7/17/2017 9:59:00 AM

Michael, I really enjoyed this poem. I received a special invitation from the "Soup" to comment on this one. I hope you don't mind if I offer an opinion or two. To me, writing in all capital letters is like shouting and it is not as easy to read. I use it when I want to emphasize a passage but not normally for the whole piece. Also, some poets abhor punctuation but there is a spot or two in this poem where a comma would help with clarity. Again, I enjoyed this poem. Dean

Michael E. Harris
Date: 7/17/2017 6:56:00 PM

Thank You Dean for the kind words and suggestions. With out the punctuation one has the opportunity to inherit unlimited points of view.

Sudarsan Mishro

Date: 7/17/2017 6:26:00 AM

Beautiful poem,sir.Beautiful words arranged beautifully with a fine sense of rhythm expressing a wonderful idea.A feeling of fulfilment you must have experienced after writing this piece.

Jean Murray

Date: 7/17/2017 3:41:00 AM

Wish I was there.

John Fleming

Date: 8/28/2016 5:51:00 AM

Enjoyed your verse, Michael. Starry nights...Lovely theme for a poem. My best regards - And a seven! :) john

Michael E. Harris
Date: 8/31/2016 11:44:00 AM

Thank You for such kind words. posted new work. North Shore

James Long

Date: 8/3/2016 10:35:00 AM

Loved this friend great writing. Easy to read, and digest. Very well done friend.

Michael E. Harris
Date: 8/3/2016 9:09:00 PM

Thank You James