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The Crazy Hunter

By: Ali Taha Alnobani He did not do anything extraordinary Did not discover the secret of happiness And surely did not invent the machine that collects rays of the sun in a painting He sat among his friends proud of his depravities In an acted way of formalities *** Now he can boast about his manhood Like a foolish boy made of wood "I spent a wonderful time with her My soul flew with kisses And my body was trembling With a very nice relaxing! She believed me And when I left her Her face was yellow Like lemon And my eyes were sparking Like a demon". *** Hunters have no heart And crimes are their ribbon His reverent silent friends were looking at him "My mother taught me: "It is not a shame for a man to deceive a woman Females who give you themselves have no honor" So I hunt women as if I were a trap" He laughed loudly and removed his cap Then he rubbed his mustache And suddenly screamed "I'm the king When I touch my ring I can swallow an angel". *** So here in the dark world We have two sides Schools for male... And schools for female Streets for male…and streets for female Dusk for male… and another for female And in between We have crazy hunters Fond of their depravities ***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2016 8:43:00 PM
Great read Ali A... LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2016 1:15:00 PM
ALI, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:12:00 AM
great poem by the way..really saw some true colors twirling in shades of black..you did it justice...the truth shown!
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:11:00 AM
enjoy the friendships made in depravity...a lifelong commitment..and i do mean life long
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:08:00 AM
i would agree he did not do anything extraordinary other then rebuke holy advice and hold hands with false visions of grandeur on pathetic lying profiles... praying for a more fruitful encounter with someone worthy of my time and form of praise, God forbid he accepts his own victimization of others with his selfishness of coming forward in truth, dont let anyone intervere with his undying happiness of living a life covertly, or posting porn on sites that 13 years old can read..
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:05:00 AM
good things those deceiving men get locked down from heavens doors..good riddens...good poem, it is nice to read something that reminds me of people going to hades and remaining for deceiving women openly...
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