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The Cosmos

An ecumenical crown Illuminating the night sky, A celestial carousel Cosmic stars, travel with Greek heros. For: A Poem Crafted in the Various Lind30 Poetry Contest Created by Robert Lindley Form Used: Lind30SU Syllable count 7/7/7/9 ~checked on Poetry Soup Syllable Counter Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke Date: January 30, 2022

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2022 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful sky travel write. Have a great/blessed day.................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/2/2022 7:51:00 AM

Paulette, This had me thinking of Mount Olympus home of the Greek Immortals..Delice

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/2/2022 8:57:00 AM

Glad I was able to evoke the imagery to life! As always I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/2/2022 6:01:00 AM

Exhilarating imagery of the night sky, Paulette:) should place high:)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/2/2022 9:01:00 AM

Thank you Jo~ The night sky is a revolving book of imagery~glad you enjoyed it. :) Paulette

Len Gasun

Date: 2/1/2022 4:27:00 AM

Awesome poem with a fantastic imagery. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest too and thanks for stopping by. Hugs.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/1/2022 1:39:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by to comment. Glad you enjoyed the imagery; hope you could see the night sky too! :) Paulette

Anil Deo

Date: 1/31/2022 2:43:00 AM

Nicely said; not quite pagan, LOL!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/31/2022 7:42:00 AM

Looking at it strictly from the perspective of a poetic astronomer~LOL! thanks for stopping by to comment. :) Paulette

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/30/2022 1:32:00 PM

Wonderfully descriptive poem--succinctly done.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/30/2022 2:25:00 PM

Thank Vijay~love the night sky! :) Paulette