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The Continuing Saga of Adam and Eve

The Story of Adam and Eve Is all well and good and fine, It marks the frailties of each sex Without really trying. First of all it shows the Love of our Creator, The One, the Good, the True, the Beautiful, And the deviousness of the Hater. Antithesis of Love and Justice; a traitor. The story of Adam and Eve Is all well and good and fine. It marks the frailties of each sex Without really trying. In our selfish disobedience we are the very same today, In our sinful expedience to get our own way. Adam was created first, the woman as an ad lib. Because Adam was lonely for his own kind God formed her from his rib. Well, they were doing just fine Until one day the serpent said “Eve You want to be like God, I believe.” She said yes that would be fine. So she gave Adam a tempting plausible line, And he apathetically joined in the sinful crime. Didn’t want to make any waves, you know, After all he had his seeds to sow. And so we see how they fared Still, woman always shooting for control The man timid and scared. The snake laughing in his hole. So men, before you succumb to so called feminists and both sexes spend eternity crying… Remember, ..God only gave her your rib… so please,.. take back your spine.

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Date: 12/16/2016 7:06:00 AM
Enjoyed, Robert!
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Date: 11/8/2012 8:48:00 PM
I love your take on the story Bob, it is a great one to begin with but then you insert your magic and it has a new feeling retaining the old message. Loved it!
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