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Life seemed rather bleak The grey skies to him did speak Of a better world Somewhere, but not here He was thought of with smiles Always a good word A Laugh or two Who the hell thought, inside was all blue He dressed up one day As a gigantic peanut Of to the circus he did go Knowing his fate, he paid at the gate An elephant’s eye lit up A dessert finally of size He ate the gigantic peanut The skies have now turned gaily blue They say committing suicide is nuts This irony is that it turned out to be true The coroner took care, waiting and waiting At the elephants end, for suicides revenge As the dark and despondent man quite frankly Had such a shitty termination The smell of sadness Hangs in the air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/9/2015 7:18:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/15/2015 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Funom , much appreciated!!!!!
Date: 6/28/2015 1:20:00 PM
OMG, committing suicide is NUTS. Hahaha. REALLY?? It's Peanuts!! Planters in the ground. You are such a CARD, Arthur. Just love your entertaining reads.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:30:00 PM
:)
Date: 6/27/2015 3:49:00 AM
with gothic wit and depth, this write shines, arthur!.. huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Nette!
Date: 6/27/2015 12:04:00 AM
Arthur, you are indeed the master of writing with dark humor. Such creative work!... Reminds me of my poem, "A Tempting Fate". You might like to give it a read.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:26:00 PM
I will go have a peek! :)
Date: 6/25/2015 4:55:00 PM
Arthur it is nice to be here reading your work, I like the irony in this it is bitter sweet, well done my friend...David
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:26:00 PM
I hope you are doing well David, you are very missed on this site!!!! Thanks!
Date: 6/25/2015 1:26:00 PM
This is very sad indeed, but so masterfully written, Arthur. Great write, a 7 :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thanks Laura, :) xoxo
Date: 6/25/2015 8:28:00 AM
I think you meant "Off to the circus". This is a bizarre and effective write Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:24:00 PM
no Richard I meant "Of " but after 2 bottles of wine and much contemplation, and a meeting at the local pub, we discussed your suggestion, and came to the conclusion, you win! It sounds much better saying "off" LOL Cheers, thanks!
Date: 6/25/2015 7:15:00 AM
Well that is an interesting way to go!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/28/2015 6:22:00 PM
well its hard for things to get any worse!

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