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The Condition

If her heart shall settle so Like plucked-off leaves where there's no breeze Like ice or fallen snow Strewn on those fields where there's no one, I’ll be to her like is the ground That’s always a floor when these things fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/8/2017 3:21:00 PM
Oh what a wonderful potent little poem, my favourite kind. Fave and a seven for this sublime offering :) xomo!
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 5/8/2017 4:53:00 PM
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you.... I'm glad it appeals to you Maureen.

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