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Thunder sounds over the dreaming ocean Shifting clouds compete for the best positions The fresh scent of change carries on the wind Birds are banking to land skimming the faulty cliffs, crabs scuttle into hidden crevices as drizzle turns to rain I cease to wander giving credence to Nature’s signals, I seek shelter and safety envelops me as I enter my front door Thunder sounds over the dreaming ocean I watch lightning flashing over the cliffs, cosy inside my living room, like a crab in his element.

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Date: 3/6/2020 11:05:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Suzanne.
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Date: 2/24/2020 9:22:00 AM
Such beautiful penning SuZ, great imagery displayed bringing storms to life. Grand stuff! Have great day, Gordon
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Date: 12/31/2019 6:13:00 PM
Wonderful first line, so enthralling-
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/31/2019 8:13:00 PM
Thanks Michelle: I appreciate your visits.
Date: 11/22/2019 1:58:00 PM
I love the contrasting images between the first and second parts of this beautiful poem, Suzanne. I also love the two end lines...the safety and cosiness that a house/home offers. Hugs // paul
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/22/2019 5:17:00 PM
Yes, Paul: More and more, I love the cosy feel of home. So good to see you here. You always bring friendship and light. Hugs, SuZ
Date: 11/20/2019 6:46:00 PM
Hello Suzanne … nicely described, and very wise. Every storm can have a different outcome so it pays to prepare - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/22/2019 5:19:00 PM
G’Day Lindsay: I remember the thunderstorms of my childhood. I was a bit terrified of them until someone told me it was God bumping clouds together. Amazing how an explanation can put your mind at ease. LOL. SuZ
Date: 11/19/2019 8:31:00 PM
Best place to be when a storm hits, must say they're awesome to see. Tom
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/20/2019 4:22:00 AM
Good Morning Tom: This is one of my older poems from when we lived nearer the ocean. Yes, I agree, storms are awesome to watch. Good to see you. SuZ
Date: 11/19/2019 8:27:00 PM
Hi Suzanne well put together. I love poems that leave a picture in your head and you did a fine job at this one. THanks for sharing
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/20/2019 4:24:00 AM
Hi Gregory: Thanks for reading and commenting. It means a lot. SuZ

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