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The Colour of Love

My pain A painting of shame Upon these white walls of stature So statute, so still, motionless My heart bleeds but only tears fall As I portray this vivid pain A portrait So poor in trait As I pour out my heart Of all these techerous traits And yearn for what once remained A trace of love, Embodied in colourless contours Whilst I dry out this pain All I feel is this fear of fearing what I truly feel A feeling so clear But only clouded by pain, My picture, my painting my portrait, my pain

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Date: 3/12/2016 10:22:00 PM
T.L. Menoe, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:13:00 AM
Welcome to the community T L. I look forward to more of your work. Enjoy the ride...Charlie
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T.L. Menoe
Date: 3/6/2016 7:15:00 AM
Thank you Charlie
Date: 3/6/2016 6:43:00 AM
Deep and lovely, T.L.,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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T.L. Menoe
Date: 3/6/2016 7:15:00 AM
Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated.

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