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The Colors of Sleep

dreams like cinema grow wilder in the mind's eye... I can't turn away. for Black -Eyed Susan's senyru contest

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Date: 10/13/2013 4:51:00 PM
You captured the dream experience so vividly. Very nice :)
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Date: 10/13/2013 9:36:00 AM
Fine senriyu with images, Deb
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Date: 10/13/2013 7:49:00 AM
- Very nice description, Deb!! - Luck in contest!!! - Have a nice Sunday, we have a wonderful beautiful Autumn day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/13/2013 6:53:00 AM
This is awesome, this is a wonderful write my friend! I am amazed by the splendor of this harmonious poem this morning! What a phenomenal piece! Great Work!!
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