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The Colors of Love

I feel you as you enliven my day, I need your tender fantasy of hues- I’m alive holding warm hands, without grey, with pigments of shamrock grass; skies of blue. Midsummer days reflect amethyst tones, inner beauty resides in nature’s touch- Feel the sunbeam passion that our soul’s own, while the day’s radiance sparkles as such. Inside the magic of a heart beat’s glow, your gaiety illuminates my blaze- As the lustre rejuvenates below, above the gleam of glory does amaze. The effulgence we shimmer brilliantly, will shine with splendor for eternity. Date Written: June 7, 2016

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Date: 6/23/2016 3:29:00 PM
Hi LuLoo, the Sonnet and Love go together like ham and cheese, each made for the other so sublime. So sublimly your colours set us out upon our journey. Your Lovely hues take us through your Sonnet of Love. Your words take us on a gentle journey into Love. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Your Sonnet shines and your words sing. Definitely a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:15:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win, Laura:)
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:27:00 AM
Many thanks Jo :) -luloo
Date: 6/11/2016 3:50:00 AM
Loved the read, Laura. Congratulations on the fabulous placement. ~karam~
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Karam -:)luloo
Date: 6/10/2016 10:25:00 PM
Lovely poem, Laura. Congratulations.
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/11/2016 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Francis :)-luloo
Date: 6/10/2016 8:42:00 PM
Beautiful effort, congratulations LuLoo...
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/11/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Charlie -:)luloo
Date: 6/10/2016 8:09:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Luloo! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 6/10/2016 6:45:00 PM
Lovely write! Congrats!
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/10/2016 7:27:00 PM
thank you Tom :)-luloo
Date: 6/10/2016 4:55:00 PM
- Congratulations on your fourth place at your beautiful poem, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/10/2016 7:27:00 PM
thank you Anne-Lise :)-luloo
Date: 6/10/2016 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful write, beautiful vocabulary, I just loved it! thank you!
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/10/2016 4:41:00 PM
I'm so grateful you liked it! Thank you for my placement!-:)luloo
Date: 6/10/2016 4:25:00 PM
Excellent poem missed to read earlier. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/8/2016 3:43:00 AM
Lovely choice of words:) Sure to win:) Way to go, Laura:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/9/2016 7:09:00 AM
many thanks Jo, you are a very sweet person...:)-luloo
Date: 6/7/2016 9:21:00 AM
Love how you used the sonnet for this luloo. I think that form and love go hand in hand. Don't hate me if I use the same form and enter as well...good luck
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/7/2016 9:56:00 AM
Lol of course I won't hate you don't be silly! Thanks Tim :)-luloo

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