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The Cold Tears of Clouds

At dusk one remembers the bleak solitude of sunless clouds and dark sea; in mid-altitude winds lash them and wheeze... as trees are being drenched with the cold tears of clouds. Entered in nette onclaud's contest, " Wonder Of Dusk In Seguilla " Written by Andrew Crisci on 9/28/2012

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Date: 10/9/2012 11:54:00 AM
andrew... a winner in my heart ; just wondering what happened with your rhyme scheme??.. this is a gem.. :)hugggs!
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