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As scented air aroused my misty mind, a shadow broke the early morning Sun, aromas wafting from the morning’s grind, assured the senses morning had begun. I felt an airy presence from afar. Unnerved, I sought some comfort in my joe when then appeared this early morning star with beauty that would set the dawn aglow. She passed with nonchalance and without glance, and as I gaped, she simply stared astray, her exit, with a whim and fickle prance, fanned arrogance that whisked my breath away. I contemplated thoughts of giving chase though in a haze I let her slip away, but like the Sun, this path she may retrace and destiny could pass again my way. And as the morning’s essence ebbed and waned, her image kept returning o’er again, the vision twisted aimlessly in vain as sunrise caused her beauty to transcend. I finalized my mundane morning rite then pondered how its remnants would unfold, and knew… that I had seen the Morning’s Light and hoped once more its beauty I’d behold.

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Date: 9/7/2023 7:23:00 AM
Hi Mark - just playing catch-up. I love this! I have had only a few dreamy coffee shop encounters and conversations. People are just fascinating and beautiful when they open up our hearts.. inspiring gorgeous poetry (as here). [I hope she came back!]
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Date: 9/7/2023 10:56:00 AM
My site contains a Heroic Crown of Sonnets called “Speechless”, in 3 parts, that tells the story of this guy’s adventures in the “Coffee Shoppe”… as well as what happened to the girl. You ought to check it out - thanks for the great comment!
Date: 11/22/2022 12:36:00 AM
That is one class work of pen and mind. From the opening line, i am in said coffee shop. A picture that develops and moves the immagination.
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Date: 9/19/2022 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations Mark: Like watching a scene in a dream so flowing and perfect was the tone. Masterful writing. SuZ
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Date: 8/29/2022 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win Mark! I can hear the clink of dishes, smell the coffee and hear the sound of conversations in your coffee sound because your imagery is so vivid. And, I love the way your "beauty" drifts in and out like the scent of brewing coffee! Thanks for the poetic cup of joe! Wonderful metaphor!
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Date: 8/28/2022 3:08:00 AM
One more trophy for your shelf, Mark. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/27/2022 5:47:00 PM
An enchanting slice of life, rendered exquisitely by your poetic mastery. Reminiscent of the song "You're Beautiful" by James Blunt. Congrats on your 1st place win and wishing you continued success in the Markathon ~ John
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Date: 8/27/2022 5:35:00 PM
Dear Mark, you captured a tantalizing moment in time with poetic romantic finesse. Congratulations for your excellent trophy win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/26/2022 11:19:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me behold the scene vividly, and virtually becoming an active observant... through your awesome poetic expression. God bless you.
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Mark Massey
Date: 8/27/2022 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Beata
Date: 8/26/2022 8:20:00 AM
Mark, what an enticingly delightful poem. Contemplating the possibilities of new romance over a cup of joe! You "let her slip away!" But, no worries, "like the Sun, this path she will retrace and destiny may pass again my way." Even though I didn't get to see it during the contest, your illustrative drawing nicely sets the scene. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your first-place finish on Mile 12 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 13 has already started.
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Date: 8/27/2022 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Mark
Date: 8/26/2022 7:53:00 AM
Mark, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
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Date: 8/27/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Constance
Date: 8/3/2022 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mark. You have seamlessly entwined a morning ritual, romantic longing and pensive regret into a solid feeling of melancholy flavored with hope! Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
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Date: 8/27/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Sam
Date: 7/26/2022 3:24:00 PM
Very nice, wonderful iambic pentameter
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Mark Massey
Date: 8/27/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Jeff

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