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The Closet

Beauty in disguise Sitting so close, she's shy I want to talk to her But I'm shy as well Her eyes look scared, but also captivating. Always changing color, moss, sand or hazel brown Can she like me? Is that even a possibility? Hope swells inside of me... It's dangerous Because I know that This shy, beautiful and captivating girl will never see me. The same way i see her And this hope that I have Will eventually crush me and push me further into The closet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/27/2012 4:30:00 AM
Very well written poem Tatiana. Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:41:00 AM
The door has already been opened...this is a nice, thoughtful, carefully worded piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:29:00 PM
Nice love poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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Gabby Keegan
Date: 2/28/2012 1:42:00 PM
love poem...? sure its about being in love or at least having a crush, in a way, but the main point is how its hard. how it can hurt. not about the actual emotion of love, really. and how being gay or even bi is so complcated because there are alot of things that can harm u -words, people, just looks u might get- but thats only what i read into it.

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