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Life's clock never ceases to tick at all, God meanwhile is with you and me and walks with us all the way, We don't know when our clock will stop and we'll hear His call, So,let's enjoy life the best we can today and everyday You should treasure each day, and all the time that you hold,that you got, Appreciate Love and everything good you have now, you know, Because tomorrow, who's to know,who's to say,you may have it not, And all that you really own,it's only this precious time, here and now We are surrounded by all these clocks anywhere and everywhere, I see, We wear them, we carry them, we sleep and wake up with them, where we go, We're slaved by time and by all of them,we keep them in buildings, in our homes, don't you see? We buy them in silver,in gold,in every metal,style and name, we can't have enough of them I know, They organize our life, some are pretty and some aren't,some are quiet and some are loud,some are new, and some are very old, They give us time to plan ahead what we need to do everyday and 'time' is more precious than gold. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,05,2014

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Date: 11/6/2014 6:46:00 PM
I lovd this! Makes me grateful for each minute I am alive. :)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/12/2014 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Gry for your nice comments! :) love and light! Xxxx D.
Date: 11/6/2014 5:18:00 PM
dorian so true as our sands slowly fall time we become one with the souls dancing with the spirits smiling you nearly got me going lol truly excellent vision in writing dear pal
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Date: 11/12/2014 9:45:00 PM
Liam, my dearest friend thank you so very kindly for dropping by! Your comments mean so much to me. I am so happy that you enjoyed my vision, as you put it. :-) Love and warm hugs! xxxxx D.

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