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Ghost Gothic Eidolon, Sovereign king Tears begin flowing. Byzantine abandoned. The cloaked statue sits and waits. The tourist lifts her head and sighs. Phantom’s pain she feels his suffering. Hand on her forehead nods from side to side. Labyrinthine journey stirs stark madness. Intruders’ rash and reckless taunting Grey-sky midst morning mystifies. Glowing - white - apparition Clicks, flashes, from tourists. Take focus of the Timeless undead Cloaked statue Haunting Ghost

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/24/2023 8:54:00 AM

Love this write about the ghosts of the castle Anaya! An interesting subject/ history. :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/11/2023 9:07:00 AM

Timeless has two syllables and the stress is on the first syllable/ undead has two syllables I can’t always rely on syllable counter, it's total says 5!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/24/2023 8:56:00 AM

SC, grammar check, spelling...not perfect LOL. You are better than they!

Tom Woody

Date: 10/8/2023 2:23:00 PM

Amazing what fascinates people. I like the line about phantom pain, though in this case I suppose it would be empathic phantom pain. But we get the point. Nicely done Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/8/2023 3:37:00 PM

She has empathy for him, she knows his travails and his history. Tourists can upset the phantom's realms. Thank you, Tom!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/8/2023 10:49:00 AM

Enjoyed your write! … The cloaked statue sits and waits. The tourist lifts her head and sighs.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/8/2023 11:05:00 AM

Thank you, Kim! It resides in Vezio, Italy. xhugs

Silent One

Date: 10/8/2023 6:57:00 AM

Two awesome etherees and a great subject to do it on... you did it very well..

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/8/2023 9:32:00 AM

Delighted you thought so, Silent One, I'm honored! G'day

Charles Messina

Date: 10/8/2023 2:42:00 AM

Spooky write, so well written, Anaya. Awesome etheree- BOL in the contest, my dear friend. ~Charlie

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/8/2023 9:31:00 AM

Delighted you enjoyed! Thank you, Charlie. Your friend ~Anaya xo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/8/2023 2:05:00 AM

Perfect poem for the coming of Halloween. So well described especially when using an Etheree. You are a great poet. Blessings.

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/8/2023 9:30:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! I never know how the poets will respond and coming from you is an honor. Blessings to you

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/7/2023 8:18:00 PM

so beautiful words, i love the form too, very suggestive, and the aliterations of words, have a sweet sunday poet

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/8/2023 9:28:00 AM

Thank you, Yann! Very kind of you to visit and comment, I'll read yours. Same to you!