The Climate Changes

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nature is being wiped out at an alarming rate

the very bio system that holds this earth in place

we will be the next dinosaurs sleeping disasters

this world needs to protect the very heartbeat of this planet

coexisting with nature or face the hands of doom

Humanity has taken a chainsaw to the tree of life every tear came as a visitor as my eyes they drank from the well of the moon Somethings within memory last forever each thorn was love protecting the rose twilight of morning dew upon the grass it's there a deadly silence enters the soul What good fruit comes from sin we have to submit to the Holy Spirit defending justice is a spiritual submission to the truth To do what's right and just rewiring our minds guarding it from the true nature of man

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/20/2019 6:44:00 AM

Very good poem. Always trust in the Lord. He will guide our steps. Bless you dear friend, Gina

Na Na

Date: 11/19/2019 7:20:00 PM

Hi Liam This is well portrayed. Thanks for sharing this. Did you do this for the contest? either way its well orchestrated.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/19/2019 5:46:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) Very powerful poem ,you've written ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:))Most ppl dont even care about nature, since they're so willing to kill babies.With God we can have Love Hope Light, Salvation!Lets pray more for all, especially all the blind n' lost souls in this world, Liam!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + 7+7!A fav !You have a beautiful heart!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are okay in all, Liam.Remember the Lords always with you no matter what!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^