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The City Lights

At night the city glows with a thousand lights, Towers of steel silhouetted against the sky. They show their might without restraint... Full of mystery and the promise of untold delights. The dawn breaks, revealing the tired grey of concrete, The perfume of crowded streets and sidewalks. People hurrying to spend their days inside... Afraid to notice the huddled figure in the doorway. There is no living memory of waving grass, Or flowing brook, the warriors step upon the land. Architecture built on the bones of the past... Burying a time and place of a different grandeur. The wind blows around the harsh corners, A tattered paper skitters fitfully down the way Voices echoing down the dark alleys... Whispering again and again of the progress of man. My city..San Francisco. Gorgeous by night, like other cities by day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/19/2012 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2012 10:37:00 PM
I could really feel the city in this write having never been there. Well done Barbara. Enjoyed.
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:57:00 PM
wow, this is very good writing, Barbara and I used to live close by in Hayward. ARe you right there in the city? I love that town!!!
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Date: 1/16/2012 4:51:00 PM
I have been to San Francisco once, but I never got past the airport. I was changing flights to go to Honolulu, and then on to Tokyo. However, the next time I go, I will visit there. You have written about the city well. I believe the word in the fourth line should be "promise" instead of "pormise". Everything else looks great.
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:03:00 PM
Great write :-)
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Date: 1/16/2012 4:36:00 AM
The reader is drawn into the poem by the beauty, "Full of mystery and the promise of untold delights." Then, "...dawn breaks, revealing the tired grey of concrete," and much of the sameness of other cities. I like how your writing evoked the senses, and made me experience the place. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 1/15/2012 6:58:00 PM
Good one Barb if I new you were there we could have had lunch!!! I should be back in July..I wrote one called All That Glitters about San francisco..let me know what you think? [I have abunch on the city} Light & Love
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