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The Circle

The Circle Beginning and end Together form full circle... Life connects with death. Your circle is formed…with tears I mourn death’s painful closure. © Sandra M. Haight 2015 All Rights Reserved ~NA~ Contest: Tanka Tears Sponsor: Rick Parise Judged: 03/10/2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2015 5:32:00 AM

Life does come full circle and we don't know when..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..This will be an interesting addition to Rick's contest..Sara

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/12/2015 4:16:00 PM

Hi Sara, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/10/2015 12:48:00 AM

The stages of death really take a toll on a person, your poem expresses this well Sandra. Your Tanka is beautifully written!

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/12/2015 4:16:00 PM

Hi Connie, I appreciate your stopping by with your positive comments! Thanks so much. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2015 6:36:00 PM

A well crafted tanka from you, dear. I see this contest filling up super fast and I have no clue what to do for it!!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/9/2015 5:42:00 PM

Excellent pen Sandra!A 7 from me! the way I see it we never really die but hopefully we go to a better one, dear friend. Have a nice day! In His light! God bless! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.

Sandra Haight
Date: 2/12/2015 4:23:00 PM

Yes, Dorian, it is a circle that leads to the next cycle in the journey of the soul. Thank you so much for your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra