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The Chubby Kid

Ah, who dares to call him a big bear, when he eats a chocolate eclair? He drops it on his red shoes, to hear the pigeon's coos... then smears it all over his brown hair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Limerick II". A well deserved win Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 2/8/2011 1:15:00 AM
Very funny picture you have painted with this limerick, Andrew. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:34:00 PM
What a funny kid he must be! Congratulatoins on this interesting little limerick i had not yet seen. So you ARE in NewYork. I am sure you must have told me that before! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/7/2011 8:15:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this creative write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:46:00 PM
As Yogi would say: "YO! BOO-BOO!" A fun read. Congrats on your WIN in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:58:00 PM
congrats to you on your Chubby Kid win Andrew!
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/7/2011 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:44:00 AM
Great and apt images to describe the chubby kid, Andrew
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Date: 1/24/2011 8:52:00 PM
So cute Andrew. Love the image.
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Date: 1/24/2011 8:08:00 PM
great little write!
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Date: 1/24/2011 7:32:00 PM
lol cute write, enjoyed your limerick,..p.d.
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