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The Child Within

In our dream, we feel like a child again bending each nighttime fret into pretend. Lest lost to the trials of aging's dark din hoping it will be gentle in the end. Who we used to be, we are now no more - wee voices who cried out to let life begin. Ever roaming, trying to then explore finding spaces for sunny dreams to live in. When young, wherever we are, we become; warming sun beams hold hugs forever then. To a sense of place we'll yield, soon succumb; a restful refuge on which we depend. From our nest, peek out to the world way wide - they're too few lands left where children can hide. 114 words sonnet

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Date: 8/3/2022 10:51:00 PM
The years have changed us from what we have been as children ! But in dreams we go back to that stage of innocent childhood. In truth there is a child sleeping within each of us ! A lovely sonnet, dear friend !
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Greg Gaul
Date: 8/7/2022 7:12:00 AM
Your tboughtful insights are most appreciated. Thanks ever so for your visit.
Date: 7/28/2022 11:13:00 PM
This is one brilliant sonnet Greg. Its themes resonate with me and my own poetry. The line: "Who we used to be, we are now no more" is so true. Excellent write. Cheers - Gary
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Greg Gaul
Date: 7/29/2022 6:00:00 PM
Interesting selection of that line Gary. It represents the truth of impermanence in life. Your noting it validates my admiration of your insight as a writer... to pick the gem out of the lot. Thank you Gary for your commentary.

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