The Chef

I ate today not much but enough to taste the poison of my narcissist a recipe that is always force fed my beauty in starvation derived from evil

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/3/2023 5:43:00 AM

Having grown up with a narcissist, this resonates with me. Thankfully I overcame verbal Anorexia. I am however careful of the word diet I choose.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/30/2022 1:26:00 PM

Hello Aurore Severo, if in one bite the food does not taste good I will not eat it. Same for dessert. Hugs.

David Mchattie

Date: 6/28/2022 4:06:00 PM

I might have just gone straight to dessert. The main course sounds too judgmental. An interesting poem to be sure. Makes you think. Have a great day.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/22/2022 7:34:00 PM

A self centered poet you are not, i'm sure. This diminutive poem speaks volumes, of care.

Aurore Severo
Date: 6/22/2022 8:11:00 PM

very kind words, thanks Harry.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/22/2022 9:11:00 AM

Not an easy plate to swallow dear poet, I pray the next meal is nothing but tasty words, and so much love to feast on, :)

Aurore Severo
Date: 6/22/2022 8:11:00 PM

Thanks a ton Mystic Rose

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/22/2022 1:32:00 AM

Wow. I thought my poem would not go well. So thanks for the comment.

Aurore Severo
Date: 6/22/2022 8:11:00 PM

I like darker poems, and I really enjoyed reading your last one.