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A charcoal sketch of lonely eyes; Stygian grey reflected lies, Desolate haunts that drift from where the graphite raven sets her stare; Trembling pleas her god denies, A charcoal sketch of lonely eyes, Feels embers dim to chalky coal and onyx smolder through her soul; Her screams are muffled by her lips so tightly sewn by fingertips, A charcoal sketch of lonely eyes, reduced to tears of silent cries; She prays for light as darkness draws, once more gets groped by daddy’s claws; So now in skies as raven flies, A charcoal sketch of lonely eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/13/2016 7:33:00 AM
Very deep and dark...Is it for any contest?
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 8/13/2016 8:09:00 AM
It was for a blank prompt that simply said "what is depression?" - I saw the picture online and thought it was perfect for tons of things. Thank you for reading!
Date: 8/12/2016 1:19:00 PM
Very nice write.
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Date: 8/12/2016 5:31:00 AM
Lovely Quatern ... The refrain itself sounds a nice monoku ...
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